Introductory Paragraph (Fate) ~ The Statistical Probability of
Love at First Sight
Isabel Allende once said " Heart is what drives us and determines our fate." This means that our passion for something is what creates our fate or destiny. This quote,is true, because our fate is based on what we love or what we want to do. Every individual has a different kind of fate, we all seek for a great fantasy, but it never turns out the way we expect it to be. We make decisions in life, thinking that it will direct us to what we are expecting. This can be clearly seen in the book, The Statistical Probability of Love at First Sight, by Jennifer E. Smith. In this book fate is demonstrated when Hadley spends time at the wedding and realizes that it wasn't what she imagined, when Hadley arrives unexpectedly at the funeral, when Oliver arrives in the steps where Hadley is.
Love at First Sight
Isabel Allende once said " Heart is what drives us and determines our fate." This means that our passion for something is what creates our fate or destiny. This quote,is true, because our fate is based on what we love or what we want to do. Every individual has a different kind of fate, we all seek for a great fantasy, but it never turns out the way we expect it to be. We make decisions in life, thinking that it will direct us to what we are expecting. This can be clearly seen in the book, The Statistical Probability of Love at First Sight, by Jennifer E. Smith. In this book fate is demonstrated when Hadley spends time at the wedding and realizes that it wasn't what she imagined, when Hadley arrives unexpectedly at the funeral, when Oliver arrives in the steps where Hadley is.
You did a really good job on your introductory paragraph. You didn't use first person. You also stated your three points in your thesis which are really good. Overall this is a really good introductory paragraph.
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